Hi Ashlee, I like how you have themed your poem around fruit and vegetables. Could you try to write another poem using different objects for each line?
Hi Ashley, Thanks for sharing your poem. Reading this poem makes me think that I would like to eat a rainbow. Once, I went to a birthday party and the Mum had made a rainbow on a platter made out of fruits. It looked amazing and it was delicious too.
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Hi Ashlee,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have themed your poem around fruit and vegetables. Could you try to write another poem using different objects for each line?
Hi Ashley,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your poem. Reading this poem makes me think that I would like to eat a rainbow. Once, I went to a birthday party and the Mum had made a rainbow on a platter made out of fruits. It looked amazing and it was delicious too.