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Friday, April 24, 2020

A lady 


So a girl got married then her husband had to

go to war but her husband died and then she had kids and they had to go to war too and her kids died too and then she was all alone really sad right and by the way the I just knew that
  
The Anzac boss said world war three we will
have to reuse the cannons and guns 
In world war four the gun and cannons
will be worn out so we will have to use stick
and stone and other things we can find on
the ground that will hurt our enemies and

even steal their weapons if you can come on
Anzacs we can do this soldiers battle in and
  fell poppies are special to Anzac lest we
forget. 
girls couldn't fight only men could men we're
the only ones who could get job 

only men could buy cars only men could
go to the movies uunless you had a man
with you you could go to the movies with your
man woman couldn't do anything only men
could the only thing girls could do was help
men with their wounds and that's my stories
for today

1 comment:

  1. Wow, there are so many interesting ideas in your writing Ashley. You are thinking about some big issues, like how sad it was that the people died in the war. Also was it fair that the men and the girls had to do different things? Keep working hard on your writing.

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